PUBLIC MARKS from dusandobry with tag "child short child story"

It was a silly story

I didnt like the ending it kinda ruined reading the whole story. It didnt have any point to it and there was no moral it just ended but the rest of the story was beautiful i just think he could have ending with saying something like, "I am not very young so i will not take the heir and ruin the girls having fun at night" or something like that!

And thing it is aboslutely brilliant and worth reading.I think many of them these days have a problem with this issue.

Short audible stories with graphics with Macromedia Flash Player.