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PUBLIC MARKS from Olivia with tags supernatural & merepersiflage

August 2006

merepersiflage : Spn : Like a Storm Inside : fic

Sam/Dean. 17/21. Sequel to The Truth At Seventeen. Something kind of off about this one. Hm.. starts kind of mediocre, but the end is sharp and hot and so good.

merepersiflage : Spn : The Truth at Seventeen : fic

Sam/Dean. 17/21. Sequel to the Party Of Almost Was. Dang. This is really good. Not as light as the author's other stuff.

merepersiflage : Spn : The Party of Almost Was : fic

Teenage Winsexin. Sam 16/Dean 21. Super hot, and great characterization, too. This is excellent -- most of merepersiflage's stuff is really light; highly enjoyable, but flawed. This one, though, gets *so* many things right between them. Awesome.

merepersiflage : Spn : The Most Wonderful Time of the Year : fic

Sam/Dean. 16/20. Some really sweet, hot teenage Winsexin, here; something I can never get too much of. The ending seems rushed, but there are some really nice moments -- bits of characterization, etc. And I love First Time/Doing X fics, they're so fun

merepersiflage : Spn : He's Got the Whole World : fic

Funny. :) Sam gives his brother a pop quiz in science. HAH-HAH get it? A pop quiz? Oh, I kill me. Sequel to "Can You Take 'Em All."

July 2006

merepersiflage : Spn : Can You Take'em All? : fic

Sam/Dean. Dean gives Sammy a pop quiz in US history. Patriotic porn! A couple of spelling errors, but it's not like that fucking matters, HOMG SO HOT.

merepersiflage : Spn : Stranded at the Drive-in - 3/3 : fic

Ouch. This could have used some proofreading. Uneven. But there are some nice crests, here, if you have the patience for the troughs. And I do like the more realistic portrayal of anal sex -- it's sexy, but in a different way from idealized sex.

merepersiflage : Spn : Stranded at the Drive-in - 1/3 : fic

Sam/Dean. Tasty little bites of angst inbetween the porny fun. Has its problems, but I still enjoyed it. Flashbacks to Stanford, references to Sam being sixteen when they first started. Accurate descriptions of cocksucking and male anatomy! :)

merepersiflage : spn : Pour Some Syrup on Me : fic

It has its occasional problems; but I really, really like this. Strong Dean voice. Not sure about the syrup, but there's an awesome backseat sex scene. Sam is 16, Dean 21. Warm and sexy, with a little angst throughout. I love.

March 2006

merepersiflage : SPN : Don't Know How to Let You Go : fic

hot and porny. angst! hurty. wincest. great characterization. i've almost written this, in bits -- but what's great about being lazy is that eventually someone will come along and write it so much better than your stupid crappity crap.

merepersiflage : SPN : Pushed Buttons, Crossed Wires : fic

discipline. porny. magical deer! oh god this is hot, and very wrong. Dean's afraid, and that makes him angry. Dean's angry, and that makes Sam horny. With sexy results!